Journal: What about your essay is most engaging to the reader? What part of your essay needs the most work?
Peer Critique
Round 1
• Mark places that are confusing with question marks.
• Do not correct grammar and mechanics!!
Answer the following:
1. What about this essay is engaging to the reader?
2. What are three suggestions that you have for the reader to help make it more engaging to the audience?
3. Answer the writer’s question.
Round 2
• Mark places that are confusing with question marks.
• Do not correct grammar and mechanics!!
Answer the following:
1. What is the most interesting thing about this essay?
2. Does the essay make connections to class concepts?
3. Mark the places that you think the writer could add more about sociology.
4. Answer the writer’s question.
Mask Work
Homework: Finish The Outsiders. Revise Essay.
