Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Essay Revision

Journal:
1.  What makes writing good?
2.  What makes writing hard?


Review Rough Draft Policy!  Comply!


Paragraph Work:
1. What is a paragraph? What makes up a good paragraph?


2. Find and underline the main idea of each paragraph: What is the paragraph about?

3. Read the other sentences in that paragraph: Do they all have to do with the main idea of the paragraph?

4. Mark sentences that are about something else: these belong in another paragraph or perhaps in their own paragraph with more development.

 
Revise for FANBOYS usage and comma splices
 
 
Homework:  Rough Draft Due Tomorrow.  "The Cycle of Liberation":  Read and Annotate.